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Nov 11Liked by Hamish Kavanagh

Quite liked this.

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Thanks Andy

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Subtly creepy! And what a great use of a repeated phrase.

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Thanks, that idea of a 'chorus' is stolen right from the minimalists. I'm trying to work a few more ideas from that school into my writing, but I'm always battling with a default setting to throw in more words than I need.

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