This one took on a bit of a life of its own. Initially, I just had the 'red herring single' angle but as it unfolded, I saw a new direction I could take it.
This is pretty dark and also really well done. I can’t help but look into the layers of possibility’s. From coping through music to the reason why she had him listen to it. It was so he didn’t have to hear the potential sexual abuse given to her when she went downstairs. Saving him from the pain she had to endure and giving him clues through music.
Or perhaps a reflection of current political views and where society is going.
Thanks for the compliment. I'm going to take the Cormac Mccarthy route here and withhold comment on what I intended to get across through this story. I feel like any explanation I offer will only disappoint. I'm glad you liked it.
If this were the first pages of a book, I'd be reading it to the end.
Good Job, Sir.
This comment made my day. Thanks Joseph.
This is pretty dark and also really well done. I can’t help but look into the layers of possibility’s. From coping through music to the reason why she had him listen to it. It was so he didn’t have to hear the potential sexual abuse given to her when she went downstairs. Saving him from the pain she had to endure and giving him clues through music.
Or perhaps a reflection of current political views and where society is going.
All and all I like it. Well done
Thanks for the compliment. I'm going to take the Cormac Mccarthy route here and withhold comment on what I intended to get across through this story. I feel like any explanation I offer will only disappoint. I'm glad you liked it.